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Add The Last Passenger - #399

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Adds The Last Passenger, a roughly 2,600-word story from the supplied Captain Incredible evacuation prompt. Cerys, a junior rescue hero, must evacuate the man who murdered her mentor's father while that mentor becomes the danger. The story keeps the passenger guilty, makes the rescue costly, and ends with Cerys's changed trust rather than an explanation or absolution.

The package includes the exact prompt, provisional outline, final prose, editorial memory, Teen rating, cover, Cerys/Skylark multi-view reference sheet, and original plus selected corrected rooftop painting. It remains canon: false and adds no shared-universe facts.

Independent Codex and authenticated Claude subscription readers challenged the outline, read the draft cold, discussed their actual findings with the writer, and checked revisions. Fresh final sessions then read the whole story and completed the required exchange. The app's thread limit required a separate fresh Codex CLI reader for that last stage; it received only prompt and prose. Final repairs clarify the rooftop choice, rescue geography, medic movement, and door/garment continuity. The clearer restraint deliberately softens one later suspense beat; that trade is recorded in notes.

Validation: final whole-story discussion and contextual rechecks completed with no unexamined material objection; prompt, names, relevant universe authority and continuity checked; selected saved pixels inspected for story fidelity, identity consistency and labels. Cover is 864x1536 JPEG; character sheet and location paintings are 1536x1024. Rating covers final prose and selected cover: non-graphic murder, sustained lethal threat, painful injury and mild profanity. Git whitespace checks are clean.

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RGBKnights marked this pull request as ready for review October 4, 2026 14:58
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RGBKnights merged commit 5ad6439 into main Oct 4, 2026
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